Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to a zoo to see (wild)(bears). The workers there (provided )us with some knowledge about bears, we listened carefully and (mastered) them .I found that the (stronger )the bears are, the (wiser )they are. We (waved )to them. They were not (awful ) .Instead， they were (really )friendly and lovely. The workers( praised) us for observing the rules in the zoo.And we also took some photos there. It was really an unforgettable experience.
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95吕灵慧
10 月 前
There is a（ bear） in the zoo that looks very（ awful）, but many people （praise ）it for its （wisdom）. It（ waved ）its hand at every （stranger） to show friendliness. The bear（really） （proved ）that it can’t judge good and evil just by looking, even if its fate is （mastered） by a （wild） administrator.
One day, a (stranger) (waved) to Mike. He gave Mike the (wild) apple, saying that he forgot to take the key to his house and asked Mike to help.Mike was so afraid that he ran away. The next day the (master) of the house came back. Mike ran over and told him about it. The master (praised) Mike.He said Mike was (really) a smart boy.Then he called the police. The stranger was an (awful) thief.Finally the police caught the stranger.
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95郝明珠
10 月 前
One day, a (wild) (bear) walked in the forest.Then he met a (stranger) bear, he (waved) to the stranger bear, they soon bacame friends.One said that he could not bear the (awful) environment, another said so.But it was not long, he saw a hunter come. He inventd another bear to play hide-and-seek instead of running away.He ran far after the game began.If not, another bear was caught.He (really) (proved) his (wisdom) by the thing.But ran away together may get more (prise).
I like (bears) very much. Because they are (wisdon). One day, on my way to school, there is a bear (waving) to me. This (proves) their wisdon. People (praise) bears for kind.
This is a (real) event. Last month, I saw a (stranger) fighting a (wild) (bear). That’s too dangerous! But he used his (wisdom) to win the fight. I praise him. Then he (waved )at me. I talked to him and knew that he was the bear’s (master), and he（ proved） to me that they were just playing a game. I was amazed and thought it was really cool!
This is a (real) event. Last month, I saw a (stranger) fighting a (wild) (bear). That’s too dangerous! But he used his (wisdom) to win the fight. I (praise)him. Then he (waved )at me. I talked to him and knew that he was the bear’s (master), and he（ proved） to me that they were just playing a game. I was amazed and thought it was really cool!
When I was a child,I was a child who didn’t study well.But my teacher said that my (wisdom)was more than a little.The (stranger)inspired me.I study hard every day.I am going to (prove) it to them.With the help of my teacher ,I have (mastered) many learning methods.My parents also (praised) me.
Last Saturday,I want to a zoo.I saw a (wise) (bear) .It was that the bear (waved) it’s hand lead to (strangers) .People was amazed to it’s (wisdom) and (prised) it.
With the development of people, nature is also constantly being destroyed. It (proves) that protecting (wild) animals is a (wisdom) way. As students, we should (master) some basic protection measures. Nature is (bearing) from people’s harm to him. When we see (strangers) littering to pollute the environment, we should stop him. This is (awful). Nature and human beings coexist, and nature sometimes resists, such as floods, fires, earthquakes and so on. These are (real). We should( praise) those who protect the environment and learn from them.
Long time ago，There is a (wisdom).One day ,he saved a (stronger).The stranger has a (wild)( bear).
Becase there were a (awful)man who wanted to sell the bear-master’bear.They are very grteful for this wisdow,they (praised)him everywhere.
A（wild）（bear） came to the zoo.It looks （awful）.But it（ really） has （wisdom）.It will （wave ）to（ strangers ）from outside the zoo.People who like to interact with it will give it food.Because of this, people always （praise ）it.Bear can always eat well.
On a dark night, I saw a（ stranger） （waving） to me. I thought he was the （master）of the farm. I went to （prove） it, but I didn’t expect that this was a smart（ wild）（ bear.） He was very （awful）. I ran away in a hurry
He can’t ( bear) catching ( wild) animals. He told us a ( real) story about how to stop some ( awful) ( strangers) from catching wild animals successfully, and got ( praise) from others.
A (stranger) comes to the zoo and sees a (wild) (bear). It’s a (wisdom) bear ,it (waves) to the stranger.The stranger (praises)it and becomes its master,the bear is (really)happy.The thing (proves)that people and animals can be friends.
Tom wants to (prove) he can learn English well,he began to work hard on it.He (bears) many problems.It’s(really) hard for him. But he use his(wisdom) and success.His classmates all praise him.
I am a child growing up in the mountains. My childhood friends were (wild) animals. My best friend is a (bear). When I first saw him, he looked awful. He always played with me in order to (prove) its (wisdom). It was no longer (strange) to me. We often play by the (waves) and (praise) each other. I also became its (master).It always ran to me happily when I (waved).I (really) like it very much!
We went to the zoo last weekend, When we saw this (bear), its (master) was feeding him food. When it saw a (stranger), He showed a (awful)look. We( really) felt the near eyes. When we get home. I still remembered.
Jack and his friends went to the safari park last weekend.There were many (wild) (bears) there.Jack thought bears are not only (awful) but also fierce.But they saw a bear (waving) to them.Then many bears were waving to them.Then Jack (really) realized what (wisdom) is.
One day,My friends and i went to the forest to take risks.I’m sure that our (wisdom )must have a stimulation experience.But unfortunately,We met a (wild)(bear).The bear really (awful) because it always wants to attack us. we were at a loss.Then a (stranger )(waved )to us.We ask him for help.In the end,we got out of trouble.
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