五、书面表达
我和妈妈正在散步,在路上遇见个外国人(foreigner),他向我们询问去中国银行(the Bank of China)的路。我告诉他沿着这条路往前走,在第三个十字路口向左拐就能看见中国银行。他非常感谢我,我也为能帮助他而感到高兴。
根据提示,写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的英语短文。词数80左右。
提示词汇:go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, turn left, thank for, be happy to
写作指导：
一、审题
1、人称：题目中“我”可知，本文应为第一人称。
2、时态：由题目要求可知是记叙一件发生过的事，时态一般过去时。
3、明确写作目的：介绍帮助一位外国人的经过
4、必写要点：（1）散步遇见外国人问路（起因） (2) 给他指路 （经过） (3) 对方表达感谢和自己的心情（结果）
二、框架
第一部分：1、背景 2、写作目的
第二部分：
要点（1）主题句2+细节1句
要点（2）主题句1句+细节2句
要点（3）主题句2句
第三部分：1、概括（回顾这件事的意义、自己对这件事的观点态度等均可）
2、提出一个问题或愿望，吸引读者参与互动。
三、写作及美化
1、按框架写句子，要注意细节补充的几种方法灵活运用；
2、第二部分增加使文章更通顺连贯的连词等。
3、能用短语的地方尽量使用短语代替单词。
4、检查总词数在70以上，100以内。不够字数补充细节。
参考范文
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Today. I’m going out for a walk with my mother. Suddenly , a foreigner asks me the way to the Bank of China. I tell him to walk along the road and turn left at the third crossing. And then he will see the Bank
of China. He thanks me very much for my help. I happy to help him.
I have a good time, because I help a foreigner. I will help more people. What do you think of it?
On the road,we meet a foreigner.He asks Me the way to the Bank of China.I tell him that he can walk along the road and turn left at the third crossing and then he will see the bank.He thanks me very much for me help.I am happy to help him.
In a word,lthough my English is not good, I am happy to help this foreigner.
What do you think of my way of this thing？
Ihelpa people areI’m very.So we’ll help other people.Do you think so?
First, i said “It’s not far from here. It’s only five hundred along from here.”And then i said “First, you need to go along this road. You can turn left when your see the third crossing. You can’t miss it.” He thanked us so much.
I did a good job. I’m happy to help the foreigner.
way to the Hot Spring Hotel. I tell him that he can walk along the road and turn left at the third crossing and then he will see the hotel. He thanks me very much for my help. I am hap- py to help him.
way to the Hot Spring Hotel. I tell him that he can walk along the road and turn left at the third crossing and then he will see the hotel. He thanks me very much for my help. I am hap- py to help him.