书面表达
假如你是魏涛，昨天是你的生日，你在家举办了一场生日聚会。请写一篇英语短文描述你这次难忘的生日经历。80词左右。
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写作指导
一、审题
1、人称：题目中“假如你是魏涛”可知，本文应为第一人称。
2、时态：由题目要求可知是记叙昨天的生日经历，时态一般过去时。
3、明确写作目的：介绍帮难忘的生日经历
4、必写要点：（1）聚会前（准备环节、接收礼物） (2) 聚会过程 （进行的活动） (3) 聚会结束 （时间及人物活动）
二、框架
第一部分：1、背景 2、写作目的
第二部分：
要点（1）主题句1+细节2-3句
要点（2）主题句1句+细节3-4句
要点（3）主题句1句
第三部分：1、概括（回顾这次聚会的意义、自己的观点态度等均可）
2、提出一个问题或愿望，吸引读者参与互动。
三、写作及美化
1、按框架写句子，要注意细节补充的几种方法灵活运用；
2、第二部分增加使文章更通顺连贯的连词等。
3、能用短语的地方尽量使用短语代替单词。
4、检查总词数在70以上，100以内。不够字数补充细节。
参考范文
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