作品提交情况
第一天共收到参赛作品36件，其中：
2人为恶意提交空信息（这次不点名，下次要通报批评），
3人提交两次，只取后一次计算成绩
2人没有空格和标点，属于无效作品。
其余有效作品29件。
精彩作品展示
（作品已经在提交页面置顶，大家可以评价意见获得一些启发哦。）
His parents were angry with him for many reasons. For example, his dream is to live in the countryside in the future. Because the air is fresher, the water is clearer and the grass is greener there. He can have some beef . He also can play a musical instrument when he is happy. He thinks it’s perfect. But his parents suggested that he live in the city and get money to make his life better when he grows up. They didn’t understand each other.86王艳娟
My grandparents have a farm in the countryside. They keep some cows.So I can eat beef and drink milk every year.My dream is have a farm like this in the future.But my parents didn’t agree with me. So they are angry with me. But I think the sky there is clear. The grass is green, too. My parents suggested me to make a perfect singer. For many reasons, I succeed to be a singer.85张鑫忆
My dream is to be a perfect painter in the future.The reason why I like painting clear rivers is that I like them，but I don’t want to with my mother’s suggestion that I learn musical instruments.My father angrily threw the beef on the table on the grass and left.85范天香
Everyone has his own dream.Today,Tom goes swimming with his friends after eating beef.On the way to the river,he finds there is less grass on the road than before.And the river is not clear.He is angry.So he decide to make an intrument to change the environment.But he fails for many reasons.His mom suggests he not to give up.Everyone is not perfect.He will do better in the future.85嬷嬷
My mother is very angry.For many reason.First i don’t like eat beef.Second Inot have dream .Third she think my homework isn’t prefect.So she suggests me should read every day.86郭寒
My brother is my example.He is kind to me.He is never angry with me,He is not only a scientist but also a farmer.He can make many prefect instruments,And he keeps some cows,He feeds them grass and clear water.I can eat beef with my famly.He make our life comfortable.For this reasons，My dream is becoming a person like him.He suggest me to study hard at first.I follow it. I hope our life will be better and better in the future.86意
一些小建议
1、请注意按要求提交作品，有个别学生没有按要求填写昵称，有的没有标点或者拼写错误，导致作品无效；
2、得高分的关键点，不在文章长度，而在于以下几个方面：
a. 单词一定要尽量用完给定的10个，可以适当变形；
b. 思路要清晰，围绕一个主题开展；
c. 能早提交就不要晚交。
最后，祝贺所有参与的同学有了一个很好的开始，请继续坚持啊，相信一个月的训练会让你有很大提高的。 Practice makes perfect!
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